Structure
Character development
Plot
Pacing
General Feedback and tips on grammar, if I notice any recurring errors
Como curar um coração partido - pt edition by Nicole Oliveira
"Gabi was super attentive throughout the entire reading, and she really helped me bring more authenticity to the parts involving the lives of immigrants in the U.S. Her experience added details that made a difference in the story, making my experience with the developmental editing very fruitful, without plot holes and with more depth to the characters!" - Nicole Oliveira
Os fantasmas de Felipe - pt edition by Amanda Abdias
"Gabi’s critique in Os Fantasmas de Felipe was essential in making the story even better, with more complex and engaging characters. Even through the subtlest notes, I was able to enrich the work further. Gabi’s attention to detail was important for me to finish a concise and coherent book." - Amanda Abdias
O hotel das nossas lembranças - pt edition by Juliana Fayad
"Gabi was super attentive throughout the entire reading, and she really helped me bring more authenticity to the parts involving the lives of immigrants in the U.S. Her experience added details that made a difference in the story, making my experience with the developmental editing very fruitful, without plot holes and with more depth to the characters!" - Nicole Oliveira
O caso das fitas roxas - pt edition by Gi Trizolini
Gabi was a developmental editor for my first published book, “O caso das fitas roxas,” along with two other professionals. She performed her role very well, offering constructive criticism and assisting with the rewrite with great responsibility and dedication. She treated my story with great care and affection, something we as authors, especially when it comes to a first indie-published book, look for when we do a developmental editing. I highly recommend her services. - Gi Trizolini